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Cody Junior Member

Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 237 Location: Orrville, OH
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 10:53 pm Post subject: Mind games. |
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I try to blockout thoughts of you
Will I always be broken
She was my only token
To that of life which is always spoken.
I'm trying hard to resist
Something is telling me to persist
I want to show her my interest.
My heart
Is what she has harnessed.
All you do is play with me,
you play with my mind
My mind is what she plays with.
This is just another kind. _________________
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pumpkinface Veteran Member

Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 2193 Location: I'm in your head
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:10 am Post subject: Re: Mind games. |
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| Cody wrote: | All you do is play with me,
you play with my mind
My mind is what she plays with.
This is just another kind. |
Wow! A friend once told me, "you can't mess with his mind and play with him like you're a cat batting at a kitty toy" in regards to this one guy I fell hard for. It was a complicated situation but in the end he became one of my best friends, but it would never work out as a "relationship" - I never really understood what she meant by that til I read your poem...
Jeez I feel bad now lol _________________ Love is like a violin. The music may stop now and then, but the strings remain forever.... |
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Schmitty

Joined: 03 Oct 2008 Posts: 128 Location: Triadelphia,West Virginia
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:50 pm Post subject: |
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good work,i know how you feel, in all your poems. keep it up  _________________
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deadmanfan4life Veteran Member

Joined: 23 Apr 2007 Posts: 3160 Location: Canada, eh
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:23 am Post subject: |
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I really like this, thanks for sharing. _________________ -sam-
"I'm gonna watch that cloud above me disappear, be gone." |
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